Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

Some
people
believe that
newspapers
will continue to be the most important source of
news
for the majority of
people
despite the fact that reading
news
on the
Internet
is becoming more popular. From my perspective,
newspapers
are currently the most reliable source of
news
,
however
,
this
trend would change in the future as technology advances and environmental awareness grow. On the one hand,
newspapers
have some more advantages compared to other sources of
news
or information.
Firstly
, it is more trustworthy because of the strict press censorship that each publisher must go through before publishing.
Therefore
, not only readers are less worried about the
news
reliability but
also
the amount of time spent on cross-checking has decreased.
Moreover
, a
newspaper
is easily accessible and inexpensive, meanwhile, not everyone has access to
internet
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or digital devices in order to read
news
online. Anyone can get a thick
newspaper
with less than 25 thousand
dong
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, which is equivalent to the cost of an appropriate breakfast in Vietnam,
On the other hand
, there are some advantages of online
news
which can outweigh those of
newspapers
. It is obvious to see that
internet
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enables
people
to update
news
around the clock. Let’s take
covid
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19 epidemic as an example, recent
news
spreads throughout the country at
such
a brisk pace that local Vietnamese citizens and
government
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were well informed of patients’ past schedules. It happens quickly enough to prevent the disease from becoming widespread.
Furthermore
, reading
news
on the
Internet
would lessen the need for paper printing, which ends up benefiting the environment. Nowadays,
people
are more aware of environmental issues. It is the reason why I believe that we are more willing to make tiny environmental improvements like cutting back on
newspaper
publishing. In conclusion, even while
newspaper
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will remain popular in some regions and among some
people
, reading
news
online will eventually dominate because it is better for
environment
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and allows for rapid information dissemination.
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