Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

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Some
people
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believe that
newspapers
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will continue to be the most important source of
news
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for the majority of
people
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despite the fact that reading
news
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on the
Internet
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is becoming more popular. From my perspective,
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are currently the most reliable source of
news
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,
however
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,
this
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trend would change in the future as technology advances and environmental awareness grow. On the one hand,
newspapers
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have some more advantages compared to other sources of
news
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or information.
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, it is more trustworthy because of the strict press censorship that each publisher must go through before publishing.
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, not only readers are less worried about the
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reliability but
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the amount of time spent on cross-checking has decreased.
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, a
newspaper
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is easily accessible and inexpensive, meanwhile, not everyone has access to
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internet
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or digital devices in order to read
news
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online. Anyone can get a thick
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with less than 25 thousand
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, which is equivalent to the cost of an appropriate breakfast in Vietnam,
On the other hand
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, there are some advantages of online
news
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which can outweigh those of
newspapers
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. It is obvious to see that
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internet
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enables
people
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to update
news
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around the clock. Let’s take
covid
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19 epidemic as an example, recent
news
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spreads throughout the country at
such
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a brisk pace that local Vietnamese citizens and
government
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were well informed of patients’ past schedules. It happens quickly enough to prevent the disease from becoming widespread.
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, reading
news
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on the
Internet
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would lessen the need for paper printing, which ends up benefiting the environment. Nowadays,
people
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are more aware of environmental issues. It is the reason why I believe that we are more willing to make tiny environmental improvements like cutting back on
newspaper
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publishing. In conclusion, even while
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newspaper
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will remain popular in some regions and among some
people
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, reading
news
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online will eventually dominate because it is better for
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and allows for rapid information dissemination.
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