Write a letter to your friend from abroad to invite him to a public event in your country. In your letter:- - invite him/her to the event - explain why you think he/she would like the event - tell him/her about other activities that you can do

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Dear Joey, I hope you are fit and fine. I can't wait to spill the beans about the biggest public

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of the year which is the Commonwealth games 2022 and our country is hosting the

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in my hometown. Well, as I don't want to enjoy the

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without you, I invite you to be here

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from

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23rd to 28th

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month so book your flight from Brisbane to Alberta without any delay. Because it was our dream to be a spectator of the Commonwealth games,

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our dream comes true. I assure you would love the arrangements that our local administration is doing in order to make the

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successful as well as enjoyable.

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, the stadiums would be in the shape of bird nests and I believe it would be a great moment to capture the

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for your blog.

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, I am so glad to tell you that I have planned a number of activities for both of us. Primarily, my friend Ron is in

managing

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team so I have fixed

first

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row tickets

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for

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our favourite sports along with a chance to take selfies with famous athletes.

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, I have selected a picnic spot near

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this

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event

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site where we would enjoy

barbeque

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a barbeque

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. See you soon. With love, Harry

Mrjit147Mon Jul 04 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

216 words

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