Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Hosting international sporting
events
is an ideal way to gain global attention. However
, some people
believe that these events
are just waste
of money. I partially agree with both statements and in Correct article usage
a waste
this
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I will Add an article
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the essay
firstly
state the advantages and secondly
the disadvantages with relevant examples.accommadation
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accommodation
To begin
with, countries become competitive to hold the
global Correct article usage
apply
events
because it helps to promote their culture, food, craftsmanship, architecture and their
hospitality to the world and Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
it will help immensly
to uplift the economy. To Correct your spelling
immensely
ellaborate
things Correct your spelling
elaborate
further
, for such
events
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,events
people
around the world visit the hosting country
. They will then
accomodate
in local hotels and Correct your spelling
accommodate
accommodated
accumulate
restuarants
and Correct your spelling
restaurants
this
will help to promote local cuisine and the how generous the people
are. Thus
it will help the growth of tourism
industry substantially. Correct article usage
the tourism
Moreover
, after the event
, the foreign investment will increase as it such
event
event
the Remove the redundancy
apply
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country's
country
countrys
capability to handle Change noun form
country's
such
exotic event
and the resources available Fix the agreement mistake
events
in
them. Change preposition
to
For instance
, after the Olympics held in Beijing, a significant number of investments had
happened and Unnecessary verb
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as a
result
the GDP increased by two per cent.
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,result
On the other hand
, hosting a global event
is expensive. A country
has to spend millions of dollars for participants
security and for accommodation. To exemplify, for the 2020 Change noun form
participants'
participant's
Olympic
, Australia had Fix the agreement mistake
Olympics
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to spend
spend
millions of dollars Change the verb form
spent
for
safety, food, accommodation and other Change preposition
on
ammeneties
for the athletes. Correct your spelling
amenities
Furthermore
, it takes lot
of time and effort to organize Add an article
a lot
such
event
as they have to meet Correct article usage
an event
requirements
of every Correct article usage
the requirements
country
participating. Such
events
also
cause land and water pollution since thousands of people
visit the country
and the wastage will increase.
In conclusion, international sporting events
hosting has both advantages and disadvantages. Fix the agreement mistake
event
However
, I believe that the pros outweigh the cons.Submitted by Chathusizzie on
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