Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co- operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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or

competition

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? Two groups of parents holding opposite opinions keep helping their kids in school get

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of these senses. As far as I am concerned, the latter overvalues the former. The reasons are the following.

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, the

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of

competition

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is the core strategy to obtain greater social resources in

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modern world. Darwin's theory of evolution tells us the kernel of existence is to compete against each other.

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, people would lose the opportunity to have children. In

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more civilised era, resources,

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as money and social status, are valued the most among human beings and can merely be obtained through

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. The more

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possesses them, the higher the possibility

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has to get a nice spouse and help

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's family thrive.

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, my neighbour Xiao Ming did not have the spirit of

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at his secondary school. He did not care about his grade in the final exams and

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was not accepted by any high school. An urge for survival forces him to start working and no girls like him due to his poor resources. To stop

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tragedy from happening again, we shall teach our kids how to compete.

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, the

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of

cooperation

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is an auxiliary strategy for survival in

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cruel nature. It is a must for people to know how to cooperate, but it should be

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to the value of

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.

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to say,

cooperation

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helps people to improve their communication skills and emotional intelligence, but as long as the

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of comparison exists in

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world, it shall not be the main value children should gain.

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, my friend Bob was good at history but bad at mathematics. He used to help everyone in class with his best effort in the history assignment and asked them to secretly pass the answers to him in the final exam of mathematics in return.

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, everybody sitting around Bob wanted to beat him in math, and

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betrayed him during the exam, which made him get the lowest grade in the class. In conclusion, we are human, and we need to know the tactics to survive in

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modern society.

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, I consider the

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of

competition

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more valuable than the

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of

cooperation

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.