If a five years old commits a crime (any kind), should his/her parents accept responsibility and how should they be punished. What is the age of child when parents no longer have the responsibility of a child’s behavior?

It is becoming a debatable issue whether caretakers are responsible for their minor’s misdeeds or not and punishment should

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be given to them. It is true that nurturers are liable for the actions of their offspring, and after crossing a legal old age limit (more than 18), breadwinners can renounce the accountability of their infants. On the one hand, several reasons are there which prove why guardians are responsible when offspring offend. The

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reason is that they do not pay enough attention to their children. In many metropolises, it is a common phenomenon that both father and mother are working and they do not allocate sufficient time to their kid to teach moral values. Stemming from

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, these persons are not able to identify the behaviour problem of their scion at an earlier stage.

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, mothers and fathers are responsible for bringing their heirs on the earth and raising them in

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a way that they act appropriately in society.

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, everyone knows that juveniles make mistakes, but it is the onus on birth givers to keep an eye on them so that they do not exceed their limits and commit bad behaviour.

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, guardians' liability usually ends, when the offspring reaches the youth of maturity which is 18 in most countries. The conspicuous one is that in these phases of life, a person is mature enough to differentiate between wrong and right, and they get exposure to many external factors

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as career, the influence of media and peer pressure etcetera. To be more precise, there are certain illicit acts like driving at high speed, which youngsters find to do adventurous and these types of activities are not provoked by their caretakers. Apart from

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, the relations after the maturity of 18 are not in the favor of parents' decisions,

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, parental acts can not control their mischievous acts. To conclude,

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birth givers are the basic teacher of a child who tells about basic ethics so they are answerable for the illegal task of their heir, parents are bailed out of responsible duties when a juvenile enters the legal life of adulthood.

Khushpreet Singh Sidhu

Jul 4, 2022

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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If a five years old commits a crime (any kind), should his/her parents accept responsibility and how should they be punished. What is the age of child when parents no longer have the responsibility of a child’s behavior?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Many children no longer read books and instead spend their time using modern technology. While some people think this is a positive trend, others think it is a problem. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people believe schoolchildren should help to create rules in their schools. Others say teachers alone should decide what the rules are. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.