In many places, large chain stores are taking over the marketplace, making it impossible for small businesses to compete with them. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

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In the past decade, we have observed that big corporations,

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as food or clothes companies, are monopolizing the market.

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trend is highly controversial, as

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expansion might result in the extinction of local businesses. Supporters of

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trend point out some advantages.

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, these big sellers have higher purchasing power.

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, they usually buy more products directly from the manufacturers, and they may have better deals which might result in products with reduced prices for consumers.

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, as these companies have different stores spread across cities (or countries), they must ensure that all of them follow the same standardized procedures.

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can be beneficial, as it could result in better products being offered to the population.

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, it does not matter where in the globe, all McDonald’s meals have the same taste and the same quality.

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I agree that the above points are valid, I do not believe they outweigh the numerous disadvantages of having these retailer corporations dominating the marketplace. Not only are small businesses essential to keep unemployment rates low, but

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to guarantee fair prices.

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, if we had fewer companies selling or offering services, they would have less competition, and

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, they would be free to charge any price they want.

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, local businesses

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have the advantage of offering goods tailored to consumer needs.

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, the grocery store near my house sells Indian ingredients, as I live in a neighbourhood with a strong Indian background. In a nutshell, at a

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glance, the expansion of large chain stores may be interesting.

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, in a more detailed analysis of the consequences,

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monopolization can be extremely harmful to our economy.

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