You are going to travel to London for about one week and spend two days visiting the London Library. You are studying for a project and want to do some background studies. Write a letter to the head of the library. In your letter explain what your project is about? say what studies you want to do at the library? say what facilities you need to use?

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am

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witing

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this

letter to you, to request a kind favour

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project

. I am visiting

london

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month with my friends and plan to visit

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london

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library for my research purpose. I have reviewed some great journals that are available at the library, those would be a great hand in my

project

. Mentioning the

project

I am researching on, is to

study

the antioxidant properties of root exudates. Let me give you the background of my

study

, I am

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pursuing

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persuing

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masters

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in chemistry. The books and journals I need to scan

encodes

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the medicinal properties of plants without their destruction.

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, there are several guidelines available online but either I

dont

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have access to them or they are not completely

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available

avaible

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available

to be reviewed.

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Furthermore

Futhermore

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, I would need to reach the computer present at the library so that I can get research those articles that require a

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registration

registeration

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registration

, and libraries have those

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registeration

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iD's

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. To do the literature review of my research

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will have to

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both hard and soft copies of books and journals relevant to my

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. Thank you for your consideration.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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193 words

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