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Some people say that the best of improve road safety is to icrease the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 contemporary world,
public
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 is much more adhered to travel distant places for working purposes.
Although
 public
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transportation
trasportation
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transportation
 facilities
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 present, still it is being chosen to commute through personal vehicles. I believe that it will be a good decision to upgrade the age limit for approving driving
liscence
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licence
. The necessity of
this
 step is vital as it will ahead
towards
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 a gradual decrease in road traffic accidents followed by a surge in abiding
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 traffic rules.
Initially
, the
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 epoch needs specific attention. In
a
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research held on
annual
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basis
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 it was found that
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teenagers who had
became
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 adults were more prone to accidents. The reason for
this
 mishappening if stated in terms of biology is the rush of adrenaline in the blood ,whereas in psychology is their irresponsible behaviour towards themselves and
the
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society.
Thus
,
this
 maladaptive behaviour is a boon for
such
 circumstances.
Furthermore
, as time passes by the maturity level of a human being increases.
Such
 as, in a
family
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 it is evident that the
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middle-aged
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middle- aged
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 members are good drivers than
the
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early adults. The main reason for it is their experience along with their patience
in
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 busy roads. Henceforth,
more
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 the person will have
tolerance
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 level likely
are
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the chances to maintain driving rules. In conclusion, there will be a major decrease in the mortality rate related to
such
 irresponsible attitude of an individual and
furthermore
 an increase in
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 .
Therefore
, I strongly support the idea that an enhancement in the legal age of the driving
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licence
license
liscence
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license
 can aid in increasing
the
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road safety. It can be predicted that if
this
 measure is brought into action in the future there will be increased
longitivity
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longevity
sensitivity
 of the public as it is well known to the community that safe driving is
must
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.
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