It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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has been an outstanding tool of communication, a new debate has emerged as

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whether it is the best option for people to gain information. The following paragraphs will discuss both concerns and elaborate

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personal opinion. Modern technology has brought numerous conveniences to human

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communication, which was previously costly and time-consuming. Letters used to be the major tool for people to transmit.

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relies on substantial manpower and time, which could inevitably lead

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success of delivery and time schedule

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unpredictable. Nowadays, people could communicate within seconds through their exquisite mobile devices, and

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phenomenon has crowned

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the dominator in the field of communication.

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has

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brought some negative

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to our society while information

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rapidly transmitted.

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, in order to make their news exclusive, some

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and reporters would launch unexamined reports on the

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, which ultimately damaged the credibility of the virtual world.

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judgment,

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, viewed those exaggerated reports, it could pose threats to their mental and physical health. Violence,

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, has been widely reported in order to seize people’s attention;

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, it could eventually paralyse our attitude to those devastating

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and believe it is normal, especially for those who

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judgment,

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and

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. From my perspective, the usage of

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should exist with certain supporting measures. Facilitated censorship

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information can serve as an effective way to create a less chaotic virtual world.

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, children and students should be cultivated to develop awareness

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the media and generate the ability

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critical thinking. By way of conclusion, anything is a double-edged sword, and

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is no exception. I firmly believe that wise

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can maximize the pros and minimize the cons of the usage of

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