There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with your bus
service. My name is Tip, and I am a regular customer of your bus
company. I have been using this
bus
for more than 5 years, but recently I have found the service has changed a lot.
In the first
place, I recognise the driver has been changed. the new guy drives too fast and breaks all the rules that makes
all passengers fricking out. Change the verb form
make
On the
Change preposition
The
bus
have all kinds of passengers such
as children who take the bus
to school, the worker who wants to go to workplace
. I suggest that your company should strictly the recruitment and train your driver more than Add an article
the workplace
this
.
Thank you for giving the matter your attention, and I would like you to take a
necessary measures so that it does not repeat in the future.
Best regards,
TipCorrect article usage
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