There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with your

bus

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service. My name is Tip, and I am a regular customer of your

bus

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company. I have been using

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bus

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for more than 5 years, but recently I have found the service has changed a lot. In the

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place, I recognise the driver has been changed. the new guy drives too fast and breaks all the rules that

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all passengers fricking out.

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bus

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have all kinds of passengers

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as children who take the

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to school, the worker who wants to go to

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the workplace

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. I suggest that your company should strictly the recruitment and train your driver more than

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. Thank you for giving the matter your attention, and I would like you to take

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necessary measures so that it does not repeat in the future. Best regards, Tip