There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with your
bus
service. My name is Tip, and I am a regular customer of your
bus
company. I have been using
this
bus
for more than 5 years, but recently I have found the service has changed a lot. In the
first
place, I recognise the driver has been changed. the new guy drives too fast and breaks all the rules that
makes
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all passengers fricking out.
On the
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bus
have all kinds of passengers
such
as children who take the
bus
to school, the worker who wants to go to
workplace
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the workplace
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. I suggest that your company should strictly the recruitment and train your driver more than
this
. Thank you for giving the matter your attention, and I would like you to take
a
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the
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necessary measures so that it does not repeat in the future. Best regards, Tip
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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