The best way to reduce poverty is to provide at least 6 years of free education for all children to learn to listen,read and count the number.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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poverty
in several nations. The main way to reduce it
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provide free education to
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children
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childrens
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for
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at least
atleast
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at least
six years so, that very young
people
can
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to read, listen and count
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numbers.I completely agree with the given statement. In
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with relevant supporting ideas and examples There are
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myriads
myriad
of reasons to support the given idea.
Firstly
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education
eduaction
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education
plays
key
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role in every individual life and
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studies
is easily able to decrease the
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poverty
poverity
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poverty
of
country
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the country
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as
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if any
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organisation
orgainisation
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organisation
provides minimum
studies
to poor
people
who are not able to pay the
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modern
modren
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modern
institution fees till the completion of primary school which results to their
fruitfull
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fruitful
life they will able to read and understand about education.
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, even in upgraded
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there are major
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concerns
concern
about
poverty
in every single society,
governament
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government
should make
awarness
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awareness
program to make
people
educate
speacially
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specially
socially
backward class
people
but
also
provide free educations in schools as these consequence to
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life and
also
they can earn minimum income in future.
for example
,
people
after schooling
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implement
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offical
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official
plan on
poverty
which helps to take measures to resolve the problem of uneducation because
,
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with the help of data
in country
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constrution
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construction
of institutions should be
inceresed
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interested
increased
and make a rule any person can take a part
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at least
six years as
this
leads to important of
studies
amoung
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among
children.
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, youngsters in the future are suitable to work as an assistant.
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responsible
responsiable
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responsible
for making their
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children
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childrens
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children
educating
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because,
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understanding
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understanding
the
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concerned
about children and making them aware of
studies
since
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one year through documentaries, cartoons etc In
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conclusion
counclusion
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conclusion
,
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believe that higher
admistration
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administration
of every
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should provide free education to citizens which results to reduce
poverty
.But, individuals and
organisation
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organisations
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in our societies
also
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are also
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same
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responsible
responsiable
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responsible
as
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government
governament
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government
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • socio-economic background
  • basic learning
  • essential skills
  • personal and professional growth
  • educated populace
  • economic benefits
  • future workforce
  • innovation
  • productivity
  • unemployment rates
  • social equity
  • bridging the gap
  • underprivileged children
  • socio-economic status
  • cycle of poverty
  • long-term solution
  • immediate measures
  • financial aid
  • healthcare
  • social safety nets
  • robust educational policies
  • global examples
  • substantial investment
  • infrastructure
  • trained teachers
  • learning materials
  • effective implementation
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