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Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper any more. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The two pie charts illustrate the
energy
 usage of a typical Australian family and the greenhouse
gas
 emissions produced from the use of
this
energy
. Overall, it is clear heating consumed the majority of
energy
, whereas water heating accounts for the most greenhouse
gas
 emission. Heating and water heating take up 42% and 32% of the total
energy
 consumption respectively. The amount of
energy
 remaining is mainly used for other appliances, at 15%, and refrigeration, at 7% while cooling and lighting are just 6% in total.
As a result
, water heating in a typical Australian household contributes significantly to greenhouse
gas
 emissions, accounting for 32%. Even while heating is responsible for the most
energy
 consumed, only 15% of the
gas
 is released.
On the contrary
, the figure for other appliances and refrigeration are relatively high, at 28% and 14% each, compare to the percentage of
energy
 they used.
Finally
, the emission caused by lighting is 8%, double the amount of
energy
 consumption, and by cooling is 3%, which is not a considerable figure.
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