You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

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Hi David, Unfortunately, I have to make some changes to the trip to Canada we have been planning for so long. I just found out that my father's birthday party was shifted to a different time and I can not miss it.

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it will be my father's anniversary, 50 years. There will be a lot of our relatives and friends from different parts of the world. On top of that my mother rented a humongous space in the centre of Moscow. There will be plenty of food, come music performance and at the end my father is going to give a speech. I am really sorry, but there is no way I may skip the event. I should have planned it more carefully before revealing it to you. I suppose the party will take a day or two. If I was able to change my airline tickets, I would be able to come as soon as possible. Will it work for you if I come,

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, a week after the initial plan? Please let me know about your ideas regarding that. Best regards, Artem

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8 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

More and more tasks we do at home and at work these days are done by robots. Is this a positive or negative development?

Some people see sports only as a leisure activity, while others believe sports play a more important role. Discuss both views and give your option.