We live in an age of mass communication, and obtain information and opinions from different media sources almost every day. Although many people feel that they form their own opinions, in my view the majority of people are strongly influenced by the media

Nowadays almost everyone has access to the internet either by their telephone or by their computer, because of the internet

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information available from different sources. You can say due to the many different sources

people

can easily form their own opinion.

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in my point of

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people

are influenced by the media. In

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essay, I will discuss why I believe

people

are influenced by the media. The

first

reason, why

this

is the case, is because of the advanced algorithms that many social platforms use

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as

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TikTok

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. These algorithms are

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to keep you on their app longer, so what they do is they see what kind of pictures/videos you like and they find

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new videos/pictures in the same category.

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people

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interaction with

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that they like,

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ensures that

people

live in their own world and think that their opinion is the only

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. In comparison with the news, you hear all

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of

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and

opinions

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reason

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is because

people

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"influencers", these are

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young

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young

adults with a

lot

of followers on a social platform.

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as Kylie Jenner or Lebron

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. These influencers have a perfect

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on social media, they have perfect bodies a nice

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and a

lot

of

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cars. Especially young adults are influenced by

this

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because they think it is normal.

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, because they look

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to their idols they will

also

follow their

opinions

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advanced algorithms are the biggest reason why

people

do not have their own

opinions

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news

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which

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all

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of

informations

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and

opinions

.