World peace is maintained through the threat of nuclear weapons. Nuclear power also provides cheap and clean energy. Therefore many people say that the benefits of nuclear energy outweigh the disadavantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of nuclear technology and give your opinion.

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nuclear
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its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
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people
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nuclear power can be dangerous to
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, I would argue that it can be useful in
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world.
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the one hand, Nuclear
technology
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a
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damage
on
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the world.
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, there was a big earthquake in Japan several years ago,
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caused
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nuclear pollution. water and food influenced so that
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brought
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big damage to all of the
people
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that period of time, especially Japanese children.
On the other hand
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economical method to develop nuclear power since it is
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cheap and clean energy.
For example
, with
technology
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people
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car with nuclear power
instead
of oil which is quite expensive in recent days.
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further
damage, and it is good for
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. In conclusion, nuclear
technology
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benefit
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and disadvantages sides. If
people
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technology
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while
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world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nuclear power
  • nuclear energy
  • world peace
  • threat
  • maintain
  • cheap
  • clean
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • power generation
  • efficiency
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • energy security
  • construction
  • maintenance
  • risk
  • accidents
  • emergencies
  • radioactive waste
  • weapons proliferation
  • opinion
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