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World peace is maintained through the threat of nuclear weapons. Nuclear power also provides cheap and clean energy. Therefore many people say that the benefits of nuclear energy outweigh the disadavantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of nuclear technology and give your opinion.

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There is a debate concerning nuclear
technology
 and whether its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Although
 some
people
 might think that nuclear power can be dangerous to
the
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human beings, I would argue that it can be useful in the recent world. On the one hand, Nuclear
technology
 might damage the world.
For example
, there was a big earthquake in Japan several years ago, which caused nuclear pollution. water and food influenced so that brought big damage to all of the
people
 who lived in Japan during that period of time, especially Japanese children.
On the other hand
, it is an economical method to develop nuclear power since it is cheap and clean energy.
For example
, with
technology
 developed,
people
 can drive their car with nuclear power
instead
 of oil which is quite expensive in recent days.
Consequently
, the environment will not have
further
 damage, and it is good for
the
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human beings. In conclusion, nuclear
technology
 has both benefits and disadvantages sides. If
people
 use
this
technology
 appropriately, it is useful to the development of the whole world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nuclear power
  • nuclear energy
  • world peace
  • threat
  • maintain
  • cheap
  • clean
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • power generation
  • efficiency
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • energy security
  • construction
  • maintenance
  • risk
  • accidents
  • emergencies
  • radioactive waste
  • weapons proliferation
  • opinion
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