Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Parents

and schools are now majorly responsible for

children

to behave

good

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.But

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which one is supposed to take the lead is under discussion. Admittedly,

parents

are entitled to teach their

children

from a very early age

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when they cultivate fundamentally proper manners.Since

children

are accustomed to copying their

parents

’

behaviors

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,

parents

are having a more significant role,for what the

children

copy can really lay a solid foundation for their future development. In terms of family education,responsible

parents

are obliged to be their

children

’s

first

teachers by timeless guidance for their

children

and hard restriction on themselves.Having said that,

school

is

also

indispensable for

children

’s healthy growth.It is universally acknowledged that

school

is a miniature of the whole society.

Children

must interact with people having diverse personalities.Soon they can make clear

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the general criteria

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behaving well.

This

is the case when a classmate is praised or punished respectively due to what he has done.What

is

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more,

children

learn how to put teamwork or cooperation into

practise

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at

school

.With so many peers around,

such

surrounding gives each child a facility to experience the social life previously.

Furthermore

,

children

have to spend more and more time at

school

rather than at home with their

parents

.

As a result

,it is particularly easy for

children

to be influenced by

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environment and form distinctive while uneven values towards the whole society.That may directly give rise to different social values of people after they begin to live on their own,either good or harmful. To summarize,

parents

’ cultivation and

school

education are not mutually exclusive.They serve mainly at different periods of a child’s personal growth.But no matter how the two methods are discussed,they definitely help

children

to better adapt to

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society.