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In some countries, teenagers have part-time jobs while they are still at school. What benefits does this bring a child? Are there any drawbacks?

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Money is one of the most means
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 receiving something in the modern world. Not every parent has enough cash for giving it to their child. The only way to buy a desirable thing is
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 to earn currency themselves. Part-time jobs offer all possibilities in order
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 teenagers can work. Let’s consider some pros and cons of it.
To begin
 with, it`s a great opportunity for adolescents to feel independence,
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 believe in themselves and their powers. Sooner or later the moment will come, when these teens will have to live alone,
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make decisions and have full control of life. According to the research, people who have worked in
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 childhood are more adapted
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 adult life. Thanks to the job, they would know about
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 value of money,
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 it`s not super easy to get money. I guess, it helps them to think before
to buy
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 something useless.
On the other hand
, the main drawback of the part-time job for teens is the absence of full life and
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 number of activities
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 young people usually should engage in.
For example
, you can get a lot of different skills which can
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be beneficial in
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adulthood
such
 as learning
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foreign languages, playing musical instruments, dancing,
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 kinds of sports. In the conclusion I can say, that there is can
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,
person
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 should develop not only
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independency but in usual childhood
activity
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 too.
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 the best decision will be
working
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 only in the
summer time
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summertime
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 but sure, every situation
strongly
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 individual and unique.
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