Some people prefer to spend their lives dong the same things and avoiding change. Other, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
The world is changing fast as their daily routines are
also
changing fastly. Some people
think that changes are necessary for our day-to-day life
others believe that one should live life
doing the same things and that changes should be avoided. I personally believe that change
is necessary for our lives. This
essay will discuss both viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, some people
do not like change
in their life
. They do not accept challenges and do what they do in routine. Actually, they become habitual of their routine and do not want to add something new to their routine. For instance
, a survey conducted by GNE University found that in rural areas people
have the same lifestyle and routine which was a decade ago. The survey found that they are happy with their daily routine and keep busy themselves with their work.
On the other hand
, others and I believe that there should be a change
in lifestyle and work. If there is no change
then
life
will become boring. One should face difficulties and accept challenges then
definitely, he would gain new experience. It will make a person more confident. For instance
, an article was published in the Tribune newspaper in which an author claimed that 80% of people
accept changes and gain new experiences and confidence which later help them in future. A person who accepts change
can survive in any situation.
To conclude, in my opinion, change
is a necessity in our life
. We should accept change
and face difficulties which will help us in our future.Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite