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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless veichles outweigh the dissadvantages.

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continuing development in the transportation sector there will be many useful technologies that will use them in the future.it will be projected that all vehicles will be
driverless
 and individuals will have not any control. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of the issue and show if the positive side is better than the negative side or not. Actually, there will be many benefits of
driverless
 cars.
First
 of all, with
driverless
 vehicles, the accidents will decrease so much and we are not going to be concerned about them because the cars or buses will be Automated and the system of driving will be more accurate so it just sticks on their roads with a specified velocity that leads to dropping the rate of disaster car.
Secondly
, When the people just sit and do not do anything, that will lead to making many free times for them because they don't care about the road and just sit.
For instance
, if we look at the trip by train, on the road you just sit and you can do anything you want So just imagine that if it is applied to all kinds of transport,it will be a fascinating situation.
On the other hand
, all things in life have a tax, on top of all ,pros there are some negative visions about
this
 topic because when people get into
driverless
 cars, folks will lose their freedom. they will be enforced to stick to specific roads and sometimes these roads will be so crowded that they can not change their path which will lead to making many problems. I think that there are many sides to
this
 issue it should consider in mind before it becomes in our life but in my ,view I think
this
 idea is practical and has many pros and it will have a light future but it should not cancel all touching of the human.
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