Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a conventional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It would be argued that some people are not interested in leading their lives following their traditional

culture

these days anymore.

However

, some others believe that preserving ancient customs is

part

of our history. In my

opinion

, the traditional

culture

has advantages and disadvantages. The positive effects are worth learning. The negative effects can be improved.

To begin

with, in some people's

opinion

, many festivals and celebrations are

part

of our identity and maintaining them is an indispensable

part

of our life and our duty. I strongly believe that it is vital for every

culture

to preserve its

traditions

. Because if we stop observing traditional celebrations, or if we do not uphold them, we will soon lose our cultural identity. Take Yalda night,

for example

, the Iranian celebration of the winter solstice, which we cherish every year and shows our historical background.

Therefore

, with preserve the traditional cultures we could learn various information from our ancestors. On the hand, in some people’s

opinion

, many cultural

traditions

had negative effects on society.

For example

, many ancient cultures have a deeply ingrained belief that girls should not have an education. It goes without saying that, education plays a crucial role in our society's promotions at every stage.

As a result

of staying out of

this

belief and providing practical education for all citizens, the country moves on the ladder of success at a lightning-fast pace.

Thus

, it is clear that many

traditions

better be changed and globalization helps

this

evaluation with to progress of the internet and social media. In my

opinion

, many

traditions

are

part

of the heritage and that should be maintained. We need to remember the importance of our

culture

because the essence is memory. The interest to keep is not only important for the single individual but even more for the history, to be unique and not a standardized group of people. On the other side, many customs should be changed in our modern life. It is probably best to protect them by letting customs evolve over time. In conclusion, respect for old

traditions

is necessary, but it is

also

imperative to keep up with modern times with technology and Globalization. I genuinely believe that

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all aspects of old

traditions

are not flawless and it is not possible to uphold them without considering the modern world.