Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a conventional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It would be argued that some people are not interested in leading their lives following their traditional

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these days anymore.

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, some others believe that preserving ancient customs is

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of our history. In my

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, the traditional

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has advantages and disadvantages. The positive effects are worth learning. The negative effects can be improved.

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with, in some people's

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, many festivals and celebrations are

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of our identity and maintaining them is an indispensable

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of our life and our duty. I strongly believe that it is vital for every

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to preserve its

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. Because if we stop observing traditional celebrations, or if we do not uphold them, we will soon lose our cultural identity. Take Yalda night,

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, the Iranian celebration of the winter solstice, which we cherish every year and shows our historical background.

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, with preserve the traditional cultures we could learn various information from our ancestors. On the hand, in some people’s

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, many cultural

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had negative effects on society.

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, many ancient cultures have a deeply ingrained belief that girls should not have an education. It goes without saying that, education plays a crucial role in our society's promotions at every stage.

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belief and providing practical education for all citizens, the country moves on the ladder of success at a lightning-fast pace.

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, it is clear that many

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better be changed and globalization helps

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evaluation with to progress of the internet and social media. In my

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, many

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are

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of the heritage and that should be maintained. We need to remember the importance of our

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because the essence is memory. The interest to keep is not only important for the single individual but even more for the history, to be unique and not a standardized group of people. On the other side, many customs should be changed in our modern life. It is probably best to protect them by letting customs evolve over time. In conclusion, respect for old

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is necessary, but it is

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imperative to keep up with modern times with technology and Globalization. I genuinely believe that

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all aspects of old

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are not flawless and it is not possible to uphold them without considering the modern world.