IELTS Writing Practice. One of the major problems that face today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory houses for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

The world population has increased over the decades.So it becomes a huge impact on constructing apartments while control of damaging the environment by the

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essay, I will discuss the facts and how they are related and state my opinion end of the essay.

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with, Most individuals tend to move to urban

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because of the infrastructure

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and other benefits.

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, a person who could not satisfied with the infrastructure

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like hospital facilities, transportation systems and job opportunities will eventually move to the city. So , urban

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are densely populated and accommodation places are not in satisfactory condition. To overcome these circumstances and maintain the city life well-being,

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add taxes on living expenses in the urban

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.

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, the

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is involved to improve the

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even in

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rural

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. They try to construct apartments rather than single-storey buildings which leads to saving more land.

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,in the Middle East , a leader has planned to construct urban cities in a desert. When he started the construction, most people did not believe it would be a successful project.

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, most people migrate to that city to get job opportunities and get other benefits.

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,it is a paradise for foreigners.

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, it's clearly stated that the

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can minimize the environmental damage when they provide a convenient house. To summarize, even though

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is difficult to save the environment

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try

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best to give good accommodation

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to the public. In my opinion,

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and the public should be equally involved to protect the environment while having

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satisfactory accommodation to live

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