You are planning to visit another country. A member of your family lives in that country. Write to them and ask for some information. in your letter, -Identify when you last saw them -Explain where you plan to go and ask if they have any suggestions -Ask if they would like to come with you

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Dear Amie, Hope you're well. Did you find the job that you were looking for? I'

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just writing to let you know that I'

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coming to Switzerland

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month, and I really hope you can join me on my trip. Do you remember, we had a blast

last

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year!

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, I can't really recall the exact date of my visit. Actually, I've to mention the details in my visa application form, and since your memory is far better than mine, I thought you'

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help me. You'

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be glad to know that I'

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planning a holiday in Engelberg, a town in Switzerland, which is just about a hundred miles from your home. I've heard about the very famous Mount Titlis, I'd surely go there. Can you suggest some other tourist attractions?

Although

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I was thinking of a solo trip earlier, I thought I'

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enjoy

even

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it even

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more with you. You've always been my partner in crime! So, I really hope you can join me for a weekend. Because my brother-in-law is so understanding, I'

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sure he can excuse you for just 3 days, and that much you can do for your little sister. I'

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share with you the itinerary later via

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apply

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e-mail. Hoping to see you soon! Warm wishes, Katie

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You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

209 words

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