You are planning to visit another country. A member of your family lives in that country. Write to them and ask for some information. in your letter, -Identify when you last saw them -Explain where you plan to go and ask if they have any suggestions -Ask if they would like to come with you

#visit #country #member #lives #information #-identify #-explain #plan #suggestions #-ask

Dear Amie, Hope you're well. Did you find the job that you were looking for? I'

just writing to let you know that I'

coming to Switzerland

month, and I really hope you can join me on my trip. Do you remember, we had a blast

last

year!

However

, I can't really recall the exact date of my visit. Actually, I've to mention the details in my visa application form, and since your memory is far better than mine, I thought you'

help me. You'

be glad to know that I'

planning a holiday in Engelberg, a town in Switzerland, which is just about a hundred miles from your home. I've heard about the very famous Mount Titlis, I'd surely go there. Can you suggest some other tourist attractions?

Although

I was thinking of a solo trip earlier, I thought I'

enjoy

even

Correct pronoun usage

it even

show examples

more with you. You've always been my partner in crime! So, I really hope you can join me for a weekend. Because my brother-in-law is so understanding, I'

sure he can excuse you for just 3 days, and that much you can do for your little sister. I'

share with you the itinerary later via

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

e-mail. Hoping to see you soon! Warm wishes, Katie

Submitted by amanmalik640 on Wed Jul 06 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

209 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

8
band
A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
I'm writing to provide you with suggestions based on my past experiences so that you can have a great summer vacation.
6
band
Scientists tell us some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that millions of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions?
It is true that people tend to ignore the negative consequences of unhealthy lifestyles although experts and researchers have warned them about these problems. There are several reasons why people continue to lead an unhealthy lifestyle, and actions should be taken to tackle this problem.
5.5
band
Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?
Most parents believe that their child's entire free time should be utilized only for studies as they desire their kids should excel in academics. I believe that children should not spend their free hours only on studies as there are more important things in life that youngsters need to focus on.
4
band
The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the personal information of many people is held by large internet companies and organisations. In my opinion, the merits of saved the personal information of individuals by large internet companies and organisations outweigh the demerits.
4.5
band
Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We are living in a 21 century, but still every country has poverty. The biggest reasons in my opinion are the economy structure of the country and the lack of education, which I will discuss in detail in this essay.

You are planning to visit another country. A member of your family lives in that country. Write to them and ask for some information. in your letter, -Identify when you last saw them -Explain where you plan to go and ask if they have any suggestions -Ask if they would like to come with you

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Scientists tell us some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that millions of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions?

Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?

The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.