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You are planning to visit another country. A member of your family lives in that country. Write to them and ask for some information. in your letter, -Identify when you last saw them -Explain where you plan to go and ask if they have any suggestions -Ask if they would like to come with you

#visit #country #member #lives #information #-identify #-explain #plan #suggestions #-ask
Dear Amie, Hope you're well. Did you find the job that you were looking for? I'
m
 just writing to let you know that I'
m
 coming to Switzerland
next
 month, and I really hope you can join me on my trip. Do you remember, we had a blast
last
 year!
However
, I can't really recall the exact date of my visit. Actually, I've to mention the details in my visa application form, and since your memory is far better than mine, I thought you'
ll
 help me. You'
ll
 be glad to know that I'
m
 planning a holiday in Engelberg, a town in Switzerland, which is just about a hundred miles from your home. I've heard about the very famous Mount Titlis, I'd surely go there. Can you suggest some other tourist attractions?
Although
 I was thinking of a solo trip earlier, I thought I'
ll
 enjoy
even
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 more with you. You've always been my partner in crime! So, I really hope you can join me for a weekend. Because my brother-in-law is so understanding, I'
m
 sure he can excuse you for just 3 days, and that much you can do for your little sister. I'
ll
 share with you the itinerary later via
an
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e-mail. Hoping to see you soon! Warm wishes, Katie
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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