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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#people #reason #language #travel #work #foregin #country #someone
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Nowadays,learning new languages becomes an upward trend among
people
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 because of globalisation and flourishing technology.Some
people
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 assume that the only reason
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 to travel or work in other countries.Some of them
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 argue that these are not the single reasons why we should learn a new
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.In
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 essay,we will discuss both aspects of these debatable issues .
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 of all,in
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multilingual could bring you so many opportunities .
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,many young adults in my country are now tremendously learning Japanese to be able to work in Japan .The only reason is that the basic salary in Japan is much
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higher than
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in our country.We cannot deny that high salaries are one of the forcing motives for learning a new
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.In
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world
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,travelling to new destinations becomes popular because of better
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.
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 it is not vital to learn a new
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 to travel,it is always better to know some of the basic words so you can connect with new
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 and broaden your horizons.
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,for the students who are eager to study in higher ranking universities in foreign countries,fluency in the original
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 of the chosen country comes
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.There is no doubt that would make
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abroad.Another reason is that learning multiple languages can delay brain
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 and supports the cells inside of it .On top of that,the chances of getting Alzheimer's disease and memory loss are considerably low in
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 who
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 two or more languages. Taking everything into
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,for some
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 the main
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 of learning a foreign
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 to travel or work in other countries,we cannot the benefits we could get from it including supporting brain memory and wider social community.
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