You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping center near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter • say how you heard about the plan • explain how you feel about it • ask for more information about it Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to enquire about a shopping centre that will build near my accommodation, and please explain why
this
plan came out without clear information in my community. I am grateful that the shopping centre will build near my home, so I do not need to go to town for buying staff. The
first
thing I would like to know is the levels of the building.
This
project will take how many days to finish. I have concerned about the noise and danger that come from the construction process. I would
also
like to know do you have
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safety instructions for us, so I think it will help us to prevent all kinds of risks that can happen during the building process.
Moreover
, our village has many kids and elders, so I am really concerned about
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safety. One more thing, How big of the shopping mall will be? I would like to thank you in advance for
this
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and am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Jane
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