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In many cities many people are living alone What are the reason for it? Is this a positive or a negative?

#cities #people #reason
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carbon
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 (CO2) one person releases into
atmosphere
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 which is collected from
UK
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,
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 1967 At
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frist
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 in 1967, there were more than 1,5
tonnes
 of CO2 per person discharged in Portugal, 4,2-tonne in Italy, 8,8
tonnes
 of gases in
Sweden
 and the highest one was
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 with 10,4
tonnes
 of
carbon
dioxide
 per citizen. ( The
UK
 and
Sweden
 have the most emissions of the 4 countries with about 10,4 tons and 8,8 tons respectively in 1977, 4 times more than Italy and 5 times more than Portugal). While other
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gases
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 releases increased to
alarming
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 level in 1977, the rate in
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stabilize
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 and
and
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tended to decrease.
During
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 1977 to 1997, the trend of
carbon
dioxide
 emissions had two different ways. The
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frist
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 one which had the increasing rate, the developing countries tended to
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 up include Portugal ( from 2,1 to 5,3
tonnes
) and Italy (from 6,1 to 7,8
tonnes
). Whereas, in
Sweden
, there was a sudden fall of 6
tonmes
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tonnes
 and 8,8
tonnes
 in
UK
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.
Lastly
, the figures for
Sweden
 and Portugal were at about 5,7
tonnes
 while they
they
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reached about 8
tonnes
 in both Italy and
UK
 in 2007. Overall, the inhabitants of the
UK
 are responsible for the highest discharge of all time. ( At the downward trends are considered to be connected with the changes
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is
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 economic development and high-, tech inventions which reduce
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of
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carbon
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)
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