Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern era, university education is a vital key for
the
quality improvement in human resources. Some people believed that Correct article usage
apply
students
should be attended college without Use synonyms
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a fee
fee
. From my perspective, waiving university Fix the agreement mistake
fees
tuition
generates more negative effects for both learners and society than its perks.
There are several convincing reasons to support Use synonyms
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the free
free -college
policy. Correct your spelling
free-college
Firstly
, Linking Words
this
scheme will provide Linking Words
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opportunity to pursue higher education for all Correct your spelling
equal
students
, especially the underprivileged. Use synonyms
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it is Add a comma
,Moreover
also
conducive for them to Linking Words
landing
on a well-paid Change the form of the verb
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job
and increase their living standard. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
Furthermore
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tuition
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fee
, the number of graduates may escalate significantly which will not only boost workforce quality but Fix the agreement mistake
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also
promote economic growth.
Despite the benefits stated above, it Linking Words
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that pursuing college without Change the verb form
denies
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fee
leads to Correct article usage
a fee
the
lack of motivation to study. A recent study at five American universities has evidenced that undergraduates, who have to pay Correct article usage
a
tuition
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fee
, tend to have higher academic performance than Fix the agreement mistake
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students
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covered
university costs. Correct pronoun usage
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Furthermore
, since more Linking Words
students
can take part in higher education, Use synonyms
workforce
increases rapidly in both quality and quantity, which triggers the difficulty for bachelor’s degree holders to apply for good jobs. Correct article usage
the workforce
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, if governments spend Linking Words
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an enormous
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fee
, Fix the agreement mistake
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a
heavy pressure will be put on Remove the article
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national
budget, followed by seriously financial deficits, undesired tax hikes or even Add an article
the national
decrease
in welfare. To cite Correct article usage
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example
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an example
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that
free-college scheme is only possible in developed countries Correct determiner usage
the
such
as Finland, not in less-developed nations.
In conclusion, in spite of some potential advantages of Linking Words
free-college
policy, I believe that waiving Correct article usage
the free-college
tuition
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fee
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do
more harm than good and Change the verb form
does
government
should not apply it Correct article usage
the government
for
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to
young
generation.Correct article usage
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