Some people think to be successful, you need to get in a university education, whereas other say that it is not true. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
The efficiency of
university
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education
on a Use synonyms
people
’s Use synonyms
life
is debatable. Some individuals opine that it is Use synonyms
must
to get a Correct article usage
a must
university
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degree
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for
become Change preposition
to
sucessful
, Correct your spelling
successful
while
others oppose Linking Words
this
view. I believe that higher Linking Words
education
is necessary Use synonyms
on
a Change preposition
in
person
’s Use synonyms
life
but a Use synonyms
person
can be effectual without Use synonyms
third level
Add a hyphen
third-level
education
.
The prime reason why some Use synonyms
people
believe that success depends on tertiary Use synonyms
education
is that it is essential Use synonyms
on
professionalChange preposition
for
career
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careers
such
as Linking Words
Job
, Teaching, and Scientist etc. Use synonyms
An
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A
university
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degree
is Use synonyms
mustly
needed for Correct your spelling
mostly
these kind
of occupation. Completing higher Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
education
on a specific subject can give a Use synonyms
person
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good
Correct article usage
a good
job
on Use synonyms
this
individual platform which may help to become Linking Words
effectual
. Replace the word
effective
For example
, if a Linking Words
person
Use synonyms
want
to get a Change the verb form
wants
job
in a Use synonyms
comanies
accounting department, the company will Correct your spelling
company
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firstly
check how Change the word
first
much qualification
he/she Change the quantifier
many qualifications
have
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has
on
Change preposition
in
this
subject. Without a higher Linking Words
degree
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on
accounting, Change preposition
in
this
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person
can get Use synonyms
this
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job
. So, the more tertiary Use synonyms
education
you have, the greater chance there will be to become successful Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
in
professional
career.
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a professional
On the other hand
, those who say that Linking Words
acievement
does not depend on Correct your spelling
achievement
third level
Add a hyphen
third-level
education
give their reason Use synonyms
is
that a talented Unnecessary verb
apply
person
can become successful without Use synonyms
institutional
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an institutional
degree
. History says thatUse synonyms
,
many of the famous Remove the comma
apply
people
of the world become famous Use synonyms
due to
their greatest invention which we constantly use in our daily Linking Words
life
, but those Use synonyms
people
did not complete a graduation Use synonyms
degree
. Mark Use synonyms
juckerbag
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for instance
, Linking Words
one
of the Add a missing verb
is one
world
reaches Change noun form
world's
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person
and Fix the agreement mistake
people
founder
of Facebook - the most popular technology Correct article usage
the founder
of
the earth, but he failed Change preposition
on
on
his 12th class. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, there are lots of Linking Words
sector
where you can Change to a plural noun
sectors
be
become famousUnnecessary verb
apply
,
if you have Remove the comma
apply
specific
talent or skill. To be more specific, most Correct article usage
a specific
of
Change preposition
apply
the
famous Correct article usage
apply
actor
and athletes Fix the agreement mistake
actors
such
as Linking Words
Footballer
Fix the agreement mistake
footballers
has
not Verb problem
do
any
higher Add a missing verb
have any
education
. So without a higher Use synonyms
education
, a Use synonyms
person
can be successful.
Use synonyms
To sum up
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
university
Correct article usage
a university
education
is a valuable Use synonyms
acievement
in a Correct your spelling
achievement
achievements
person
’s Use synonyms
life
. Some Use synonyms
people
think it is the only key to Use synonyms
become
Wrong verb form
becoming
efectual
; Correct your spelling
effective
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however
others Add a comma
however,
argued
with them. In my opinion, it is needed if a Wrong verb form
argue
person
Use synonyms
want
to be made a Change the verb form
wants
prefessional
career but there are lots of Correct your spelling
professional
sector
where it is not important to become Change to a plural noun
sectors
succesful
.Correct your spelling
successful
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