In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Many people argued that it is important to use countries’
budget
for expanding railway Fix the agreement mistake
budgets
line
for fast-moving Fix the agreement mistake
lines
train
between towns while others think that the governments should Fix the agreement mistake
trains
spent
on making better existing public transport. Change the verb form
spend
Therefore
, in this
essay, I will examine both point
of Change to a plural noun
points
views
.
Fix the agreement mistake
view
To begin
with, new railways may suitable only for those who has frequently travel in
long distance. The new fast metros will help them to Change preposition
apply
safe
time and they will have more time to do other things. Replace the word
save
For example
, the old may take ten hours transporting
from Bangkok to Change the verb form
to transport
Chianmai
but the new Correct your spelling
Chiangmai
train
may take only five hours. As you can see, this
technology will be beneficial for Add a hyphen
long-distance
long distance
Add a hyphen
long-distance
traveller
.
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travellers
In contrast
, it is undeniable that everyone do
not have the same opinion. It is because there is a group of people, who believe that we should Change the verb form
does
first
improve our existing public transportation. It is true that many old train
still fully functioning and need only Change to a plural noun
trains
little
maintenance cost. Correct article usage
a little
For instance
, Bangkok’s subway trains
, They
have been Correct pronoun usage
apply
using
for many decades but just some Wrong verb form
used
part
of Fix the agreement mistake
parts
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
need
to be fixed. From Change the verb form
needs
this
matter, we can choose to reparation rather than buy new trains
in order to save the
money. Correct article usage
apply
Thus
, the government will have money left on other parts, which is seen more
worth.
In conclusion, either choosing to create new Change preposition
as more
trains
line or improving existing trains
, there are advantages for both groups. In my opinion, we should spend on improving the ancient train
because we will have money left to spend developing
other areas in the country.Change preposition
on developing
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