In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Many people argued that it is important to use countries’

budget

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for expanding railway

line

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lines

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for fast-moving

train

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trains

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between towns while others think that the governments should

spent

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on making better existing public transport.

Therefore

, in

this

essay, I will examine both

point

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of

views

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.

To begin

with, new railways may suitable only for those who has frequently travel

in

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apply

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long distance. The new fast metros will help them to

safe

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time and they will have more time to do other things.

For example

, the old may take ten hours

transporting

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to transport

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from Bangkok to

Chianmai

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Chiangmai

but the new

train

may take only five hours. As you can see,

this

technology will be beneficial for

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long-distance

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long distance

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traveller

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.

In contrast

, it is undeniable that everyone

do

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not have the same opinion. It is because there is a group of people, who believe that we should

first

improve our existing public transportation. It is true that many old

train

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trains

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still fully functioning and need only

little

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maintenance cost.

For instance

, Bangkok’s subway

trains

,

They

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have been

using

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used

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for many decades but just some

part

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parts

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of

it

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them

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need

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to be fixed. From

this

matter, we can choose to reparation rather than buy new

trains

in order to save

the

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money.

Thus

, the government will have money left on other parts, which is seen

more

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as more

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worth. In conclusion, either choosing to create new

trains

line or improving existing

trains

, there are advantages for both groups. In my opinion, we should spend on improving the ancient

train

because we will have money left to spend

developing

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on developing

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other areas in the country.