Government should not have to provide care or financial support for elderly people because it is the responsibility of each person to prepare for retirement and support him or herself. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
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is crucial when you get older. After retirement, they are likely to visit doctors more frequently according to research. Use synonyms
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, they need help from their relatives to get them there because when they grow older their bodies degrade and make it hard for them to travel by themself. Linking Words
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, their eyes got blurred and they cannot drive anymore and they cannot take public transport because they cannot effort to stand for long or walk for a long distance. Linking Words
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, their relatives need to take a leave from work to bring them to the doctor and Linking Words
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some people may still have their savings or earnings from interest and dividends, some people have nothing and are desperate for help. If the government can provide enough money for the basic need, the Linking Words
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can avoid public disorder.
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