You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter -advising them of your situation. -explain how this is affecting you. -request a new card. give me bands and oiginal photo transcript

Dear Sarah, I am writing to request your assistance with renewing my ID card.

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Saturday, I was on the bus , and it was so crowded

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apply

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and

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someone took my bag. I have all my personal cards in that bag.

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, I already made a complaint about

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, but now I do not have any access to the college entrance.

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, my school ID is connected with the transport and bank too , which makes it difficult for me to travel. Not only

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, but I may not be allowed to sit in the library , so there are all the problems I am facing right now. It would be helpful if you could issue me a new card. I have my complaint number , which I will give you soon. Please issue me a new ID card. Thank you for your understanding

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Let me know if you have any

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questions. Yours truly, Sumesh.

Kamalsohi10948

Aug 27, 2025

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structure

Put each idea in its own paragraph.

task

Make the main request for a new card clear in one line.

tone

Use a formal tone and clear words.

content

Add exact facts, like the date and any reference numbers you have.

grammar

Check small grammar and punctuation, e.g. avoid extra spaces after commas.

content

The letter asks for a new card in a polite way.

format

Good opening 'Dear ...' and closing 'Yours truly'.

intent

The writer shows a wish to fix the issue.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

lost
card
ID
student
campus
buildings
library
books
meal
plan
enter
classes
exams
problem
daily
life
now
please
help
new
card
temporary
card
what
bring
papers
proof
name
date
contact
email
phone
thank
you
sincerely

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