Some people think children should attend extra classes after school, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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anticipate kids should take part in additional Fix the agreement mistake
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lecture
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lectures
time
others contradict.I firmly coincide and
withstand the stated notion because more Change preposition
with and
classes
facilitate better perfomance
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performance
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despite
that
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the that
time
for other essential activities
will be limited.This
discourse will further
elucidate my assertions in the forth coming
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forthcoming
Firstly
,the upper hand of attending tution
will always show results because the teachers will have ample Correct your spelling
tuition
time
in attending students
weak areas as a Change noun form
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results
their performance will Correct the article-noun agreement
result
improvement
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a toddler
the toddler
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toddlers
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wants
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odds
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For example
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done
by Kenjohn(2020) in Uganda depicts that 90% of Add the auxiliary verb
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students
perform
well attend Change the verb form
performs
further
classes
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kind of arrangment
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arrangement
give
the child confidence in performing better in Change the verb form
gives
examination
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the examination
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Consequently
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who attend special Correct your spelling
teenager
teenagers
classes
never dissapoint
as they are well prepared to face any challenge in the test.
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disappoint
On the other hand
,engaging a child with only school activity is detrimental as they are not able to handle other essential activities
such
a
games despite performing well in Correct your spelling
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Moreover
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will lead to Correct your spelling
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a seleditary
illness
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illnesses
such
as diabetes.For
example
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a
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university
of Nairobi depicts that 70% of students currently cannot perform house chores by the Change the capitalization
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time
they are done with primary
level of education.Correct pronoun usage
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Therefore
,lack
of social Correct article usage
a lack
activities
can cause complication
to a child because they do not create Fix the agreement mistake
complications
time
for such
due to the
commitment Change the word
their
in
academic studies.
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would like to restate my perspective that Change the capitalization
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supplimentary
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supplementary
classes
are indispensable as they facilitate performance
of the children.Add an article
the performance
However
,imperative social activities
will be displaced by extra time
created for studying which can lead to noncommunicable
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non-communicable
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