Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The high speed and the pressure of contemporary lifestyles are believed to have a harmful influence on family life. From my personal point of view, I totally

agree

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because the hectic whirlwind of daily activities leads to less

time

for families to be together and root of conflicts among members. The reason why I believe family is being harmed is that they have just a little or no

time

to spend with their family. Nowadays, in the era of technology, people tend to use their

time

to chat and surf the Internet

instead

of having

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moment

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with relatives.

Besides

,

fast

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the fast

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pace makes them invest most of their period

to tackle

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the financial family burden.

For example

,

instead

of talking and playing with each member as I did in the past, I often chat and hang play games with my friends after

On the other hand

, the

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can cause arguments. After a day of hard work, they are usually exhausted and easily irritated.

Then

, they may take out bad words and actions on their loved ones.

Moreover

, due to the lack of social interaction, they don’t understand the personality and hobbies of each member, leading to weakening the family bond. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea that family life is affected by fast pace and pressure due to less

time

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for family and frequent quarrels among members.

Although

the era of modernization requires many things, people should need to set aside regular

time

for their

family

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families

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.