Some people believe that watching TV and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by reading books. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
In today's technology world, there are multiple modes of entertainment,
few
of them are watching tv and playing computer Correct article usage
a few
games
. I wholeheartedly concour
with the above statementCorrect your spelling
concur
,
and will elaborate Remove the comma
apply
further
in the next
paragraphs.
To begin
with, it's a trend where children spends
most of their Change the verb form
spend
time
watching Idiot Box or playing games
on tablets. This
has a severe impact on individual health. Parents can restrict them, and indulge them in reading books
like friction
Correct your spelling
fiction
books
and stories. This
would help them in building many things, wherein they can increase their vocabulary, understand
how to make complex sentences. They can Correct word choice
and understand
also
developed
'Change the verb form
develop
congitive
' thinking. Correct your spelling
cognitive
For example
, initially
I forced my child to spend Add a comma
,initially
good
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a good
time
on
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apply
reading
Add an article
the reading
newspaper
, Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
special
editorial Correct word choice
and special
page
. Fix the agreement mistake
pages
Initially
, it was difficult for her to read and memorize complex words, however
with Correct word choice
but
time
, she developed skills in understanding emotional aspects of the article, and had a good impact on their vocabulary.
Moreso, youngsters who are indulged
themselves in violent Change the verb form
have indulged
games
, they
start adopting Correct pronoun usage
apply
violence
traits in their personality, which has a severe impact on their mental health. Replace the word
violent
For example
,one child known to me, played PUBG
game regularly, due to which he started fighting with classmates, and a point came where he was expelled from the school because of his Correct article usage
a PUBG
voilence
behaviour. Correct your spelling
violence
violent
On the other hand
, if his parents initially
forced him to spend the rest of his time
on musical
or stories Fix the agreement mistake
musicals
books
, than
his behaviour would be soft and generous. It is rightly said by one scientist in his research paper, that Replace the word
then
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a child
child
brain Change the noun
child's
explode
with ideas and thoughts, and Change the verb form
explodes
this
is developed through reading books
and articles.
To conclude with
, in my opinion, parents Change preposition
apply
initially
had to forced
their children in developing Change the verb
force
habits
of reading Correct article usage
the habits
books
,
and restrict them to watch idiot Remove the comma
apply
box
or playing computer Fix the agreement mistake
boxes
games
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