Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Model

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When I was a child, I just knew English as an International

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language

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, many

languages

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now become more

pupular

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popular

than English.

People

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nowadays

likes

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to learn more

languages

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so they will be able to

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communicate

comunicate

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communicate

with any person in

this

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world. One of the popular

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language

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languages

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to learn by society is Mandarin. It

is now become

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the

second

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international

language

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which

people

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usually

use

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as a choice when they want to speak to another person

aboard

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or tourist. China is one of the

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powerful

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powerfull

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powerful

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country

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countries

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in the world together with

United

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the United

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States. There

are

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two

reason

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supporting them as the

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powerful

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most powerfull

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powerfull

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powerful

country

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in the world.

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,they have advanced technology and

militer

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military

. They are less

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another

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other countries

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country

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. They can support their

people

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with their own

product

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products

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even

website

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websites

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for searching information. If another

country

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use

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google

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as their help for surfing in

internet

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. China has its own, so they will not

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it and

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the same time, they

also

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resticted

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restricted

their

people

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use

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another website

instead

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using

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of using

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theirs. Another reason for their popularity is they

also

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give many

scholarship

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for

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international

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students

stduents

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students

. That makes more

people

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are trying

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their

there

thire

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their

best to learn Mandarin for they want the chance to be chosen

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the awardee of the scholarship.

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South

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Korean

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is the

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popular

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

369 words

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