Smokers can cause themselves serious health problems. The choice to smoke is made freely and with knowledge of the dangers. Smokers should therefore expect to pay more for medical treatment that non-smokers. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, the

number

of

smokers

is increasing rapidly as newer methods of smoking

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introduced, namely electronic

cigarettes

. As the decision to become one is made voluntarily despite all the possible dangers, I believe

smokers

should be responsible to spend more money

for

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treatments compared to those who are non-

smokers

. In recent times, it is evidence that smoking has become more popular. One of the

reason

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is

because

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companies offer alternatives to the way people

smoke

by introducing new types of non-conventional

cigarettes

.

In addition

to

this

, the methods used by the company to advertise their tobacco products are advancing, and in

turn

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attracting more young individuals to start smoking at

early

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age.

As a result

, smoking has become the

number

one issue

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which many countries are starting to face. As the

number

of

cigarettes

consumed is rapidly growing, the negative impacts of

this

have become more apparent. Many nations have witnessed a quick increase in smoking-related diseases

such

as cancer, stroke, and pneumonia.

Although

some governments have tried to limit the

number

,

for example

by imposing higher cigarette excise, the problem is still so far from being controlled.

This

is mainly caused by the decision to keep consuming

cigarettes

that are made freely by

smokers

despite all the consequences to the non-

smokers

.

As a result

, more people are getting sick, including non-

smokers

, as the

smoke

produced from smoking

also

has horrible effects on those who don’t

smoke

. To conclude, as more individuals are persuaded to

smoke

at an early age by means of advertisement, its drawbacks from it have become inevitable. To overcome

this

problem, I believe they should be responsible and it would be fair for

smokers

to pay higher medical expenses.