You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the product of your company which I purchased it from

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in Paris. I bought a digital camera

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week while I took a vacation to French. when I arrived in my hometown

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and opened

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package, I found that the charging cable and camera case were missing. I purchased the camera from the

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in the market nearby the Eiffel tower, It is a little

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,painting in green colour and in the opposite

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is a bakery

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. When I arrived home, I opened it, and I cannot find the charging cable, but it was supposed to be there.

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curious whether

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mistake comes from the

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or the manufacturing. I,

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, suggest that you replace the item or I will be given a full refund, as the warranty covers it. Thanks in advance for giving the matter your attention, and I would like you to take the necessary measures so that it does not repeat in the future. Best regards, Jane P.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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