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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the less of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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It is undeniable that environmental problems
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 one of the serious problems that are dangerous and can cause global warming. Some people believe that the main problem is the less of plants and
animals
, while others disagree with
this
 idea and think it has other reasons which more affect the
environment
. In the following paragraphs, both of these views will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached. On the one hand, the less of particular species of plants and
animals
 is the main
reason
 that
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effect
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 the
environment
. They think every species have a natural role, if some of
that
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 were extinct,
it
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 will be affected by other as well. Nowadays,
animals
 were extinct faster
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 human activities
such
 as hunting in preserved areas, and not following the rules.
On the other hand
, The main
reason
 that affects the
environment
 is the consumption of humans.
For example
, some industries do not have an ethic to manage the business
such
 as they release water which has
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contaminated into the river without filtering it because they have to pay a lot to filter the water, and so many kinds of
animals
 in the river will be affected.
Moreover
, The number of cars is increasing faster causing increased air pollution.
In addition
, humans cut down trees in forests for building a house or furniture. In conclusion, both views are reasonable. In my opinion, I think the less of particular species of plants and
animals
 is one of the reasons that makes environmental problems, but it is not the main
reason
. I believe
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human being is the main
reason
 that
affect
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the
environment
 the most.
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