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Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer?

#families
Everyone comes from a family which is the closest person to
people
’s life. But it
seems
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 appear some changes in the distance between
families
 recently. As far as I am concerned, there are some reasons for making
this
 phenomenon happen and the solution to
this
 problem would be easier for everyone to do. With the rapid development of technology,
people
 spent more time on electronic devices than before. In the past, there were not any smartphones or tablets
appeared
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 on the dining table when the family was having a meal together. After those devices
comes
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 into human life,
people
 used to have fun on the phone rather than talking with parents or
families
. It totally contributes a huge effect on a family’s relationship. If
people
 do not interact in person and making connections with each other will become hard work.
On the other hand
, chatting on social media with
families
 would not obtain any emotion or feeling.
However
, getting close to family is not so hard for everyone with some fundamental methods.
Firstly
, hanging out with
families
 in their free time
instead
 staying off and playing video games.
Although
 those electronic devices are quite interesting, it is hard to share with other
people
.
Secondly
, making more connections between
families
 by communicating will help a lot on known each other.
For example
, if
people
 have more recognition a person
that
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will know deeply and can get closer easily. To sum up, more and more
families
 have huge distance between each other. In my opinion, it was due to several reasons and it was easy to solve.
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