The number of people working online from home has grown in some countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
During the covid pandemic, some Countries have encouraged to
increasing
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increase
the
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in the
concept
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working
home
. There are benefits and drawbacks. In this
essay, I will discuss what are the positive impact and negative impact
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impacts
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of
this
concept
.
To begin
with, Most individuals have started to do online work
during pandemics which is lead to stay
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staying
For instance
, the people who have to attend regularly to work place
was limited to 2 days per week. So during the other working Correct your spelling
workplace
days
they are encouraged to Add a comma
,days
work
online by their employers. Thus
, people could save their money from traveling
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travelling
fee
and other expenses. Fix the agreement mistake
fees
They
able to Add a verb
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work
in safe
environment without contacting people. Add an article
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In addition
to that virtual meetings were popular in the industry. So employers do not have to pay extra charges for that.
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On the
other hand
, some places could not have sufficient internet access to do the Change the wording
another hand
other hands
work
. So most professionals have faced difficulty who live in rural
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a rural
the rural
area
. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
In addition
to that,teachers couldn't teach their students even government encourage the concept
of working from home
.for instance
, the pupil who can't afford the
smartphone or computer, would not Correct article usage
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able
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be able
study
from virtual classes. So students eventually fail to catch up Fix the infinitive
to study
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with the
the
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their
Also
there
certain things can be done through Replace the word
their
the
virtual classes. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, practical related work
need
to participate. Change the verb form
needs
Thus
, it's clearly stated that the
there are some drawbacks to consider when growing Correct article usage
apply
this
system.
To summarize, Most individuals have inspired
to allocate working from Add a missing verb
been inspired
home
concept
recently. Even though there is
certain drawbacks, it can be Change the verb form
are
further
improved and get the best outcome from the concept
of working from home
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...