Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There has been a controversy about whether the
government
should take the
responsibility
for health care ad education. I think individuals and the
government
should share the
responsibility
. My reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
First
, if it's the
government
's mismanagement that causes some health and educational problems,
then
the
government
should take
responsibility
.
For instance
, the factories' locations are designed too close to the residential areas, and the sewage from the factories pollutions the safe drinking water.
As a result
, hundreds and thousands of
people
suffer from severe illnesses,
such
as diarrhoea. At
this
point, it's the
government
's mistake that brings about
such
a tragedy. Regarding education, the
government
should be responsible for some situations;
for example
, on account of the poor infrastructure in rural areas, teachers are not willing to teach in these places. As a consequence, there are no good schools in rural areas, and children here can't receive enough education.
Second
, the
government
should be responsible for some pollution. Take China as an example. During the Chinese spring festival,
people
tended to play a lot of fireworks as a tradition for the past hundreds of years.
Nevertheless
, fireworks could worsen air pollution to a large extent. At
this
point, the
government
didn't stop, and countless
people
suffered from illnesses,
such
as coughing and headaches. After the
government
realized the negative impact of fireworks, it was banned in China.
However
,
this
event can still be attributed to the
government
's incompetence.
On the other hand
, there are numerous cases
that
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where
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individuals
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which individuals
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should take
responsibility
for themselves.
For instance
, the number of smokers is increasing rapidly.
Besides
, it has been reported that tobacco is one of the main causes of lung cancer.
Therefore
, if
people
are diagnosed with lung cancer, it's their own fault, and the
government
shouldn't scapegoat for
such
a bad result. In conclusion, individuals and the
government
need to work together to redress those issues.
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