Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There has been a controversy about whether the
government
should take the responsibility
for health care ad education. I think individuals and the government
should share the responsibility
. My reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
First
, if it's the government
's mismanagement that causes some health and educational problems, then
the government
should take responsibility
. For instance
, the factories' locations are designed too close to the residential areas, and the sewage from the factories pollutions the safe drinking water. As a result
, hundreds and thousands of people
suffer from severe illnesses, such
as diarrhoea. At this
point, it's the government
's mistake that brings about such
a tragedy. Regarding education, the government
should be responsible for some situations; for example
, on account of the poor infrastructure in rural areas, teachers are not willing to teach in these places. As a consequence, there are no good schools in rural areas, and children here can't receive enough education.
Second
, the government
should be responsible for some pollution. Take China as an example. During the Chinese spring festival, people
tended to play a lot of fireworks as a tradition for the past hundreds of years. Nevertheless
, fireworks could worsen air pollution to a large extent. At this
point, the government
didn't stop, and countless people
suffered from illnesses, such
as coughing and headaches. After the government
realized the negative impact of fireworks, it was banned in China. However
, this
event can still be attributed to the government
's incompetence.
On the other hand
, there are numerous cases that
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where
individuals
should take Correct pronoun usage
which individuals
responsibility
for themselves. For instance
, the number of smokers is increasing rapidly. Besides
, it has been reported that tobacco is one of the main causes of lung cancer. Therefore
, if people
are diagnosed with lung cancer, it's their own fault, and the government
shouldn't scapegoat for such
a bad result.
In conclusion, individuals and the government
need to work together to redress those issues.Submitted by junyiwu029 on
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