Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been a controversy about whether the

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should take the

responsibility

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for health care ad education. I think individuals and the

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should share the

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. My reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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, if it's the

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's mismanagement that causes some health and educational problems,

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the

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should take

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.

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, the factories' locations are designed too close to the residential areas, and the sewage from the factories pollutions the safe drinking water.

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, hundreds and thousands of

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suffer from severe illnesses,

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as diarrhoea. At

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point, it's the

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's mistake that brings about

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a tragedy. Regarding education, the

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should be responsible for some situations;

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, on account of the poor infrastructure in rural areas, teachers are not willing to teach in these places. As a consequence, there are no good schools in rural areas, and children here can't receive enough education.

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, the

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should be responsible for some pollution. Take China as an example. During the Chinese spring festival,

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tended to play a lot of fireworks as a tradition for the past hundreds of years.

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, fireworks could worsen air pollution to a large extent. At

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point, the

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didn't stop, and countless

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suffered from illnesses,

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as coughing and headaches. After the

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realized the negative impact of fireworks, it was banned in China.

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,

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event can still be attributed to the

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's incompetence.

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, there are numerous cases

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where

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individuals

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which individuals

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should take

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for themselves.

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, the number of smokers is increasing rapidly.

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, it has been reported that tobacco is one of the main causes of lung cancer.

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, if

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are diagnosed with lung cancer, it's their own fault, and the

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shouldn't scapegoat for

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a bad result. In conclusion, individuals and the

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need to work together to redress those issues.