Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument.

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The use of technology is increasing rapidly in the modern world. Growing
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influence can even be seen in the classroom. The argument that technology will completely replace human teachers in the foreseeable future is a subject
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both supported and refuted by many.
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argument before declaring a position.
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, when communicating simple concepts that can be taught through repetitive games, machines seem capable of matching or even surpassing the teaching abilities of human beings.
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, several tablet applications are starting to be used in classrooms because they are able to hold the attention of young children and teach them tremendous amounts of vocabulary.
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for simple concepts that can be taught through repetition, robotic teachers are as effective as human teachers.
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, whether
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proves true for more complex classroom concepts or situations remains questionable. It must be remembered that a
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by artificial intelligence would have little to no control over
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students.
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, it is commonly understood that children require the watchful eye of a
teacher
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to ensure that they are indeed
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completing
their class work and not fooling around during class time. Unfortunately,
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is something that a robotic
teacher
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simply could never provide.
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doubtful that technology will ever completely replace the
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in the classroom.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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