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Children's education is expensive. In many countries, governments pay education fees for children. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

#children #education #countries #governments #fees #outweigh
Providing
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financial
finantial
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financial
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the government
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 toward the academic
life
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conversial
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 because
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investment
investement
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investment
 of national wealth may
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limit other sectors and
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the
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 imbalance across the country,so, I am going to explore
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each side to clarify
this
 statement . In the beginning ,pay more attention to providing a proper condition to educate each child
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what ought
 wonders will a
sourve
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source
 of flourished a nation. Some parents do not believe that sending their kids to
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school is essential for their future
life
 because they
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 not enough expenditure for a routine living ,so,they may be deciding that spending their wealth in
this
 way is not their
priorities
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, but, with helping the government each kid will have own tuition for schooling ,at a result ,
unequality
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inequality
 among rich and poor families will be stopped and they will be more satisfied from their
life
,in the end ,we can eradicate the
illitracy
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illiteracy
 from the world and have a more aware person to
dealing
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 with the future problems ,
similarly
 the discrimination is the source of insecurity will
be vanished
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.
Second
,budget allocation for continuing academic education for freshers is the responsibility of policymakers, because they have the authority to
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controlling
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 resources of the country and they must invest
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 the proper way for establishing infrastructures of the community and it is
well known
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children are the most important part of that,
however
, focusing on the expenditure in
this
 regard may be limit the budget to assigning in other sectors ,so,it needs to
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 the general plan for managing the national finances in supporting from the
neccessary
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necessary
 demands to secure the schooling .
Finally
,Families and
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government
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governement
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government
 must cooperate together to handle
this
 issue. To
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, spending a wealth of the land on the academic
life
 of freshers have many beneficial impacts
such
 as having a great
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 of people who are professional and
illitrate
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illiterate
illustrate
that
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means they will be able to solve the possible problems in the future for all human ,
in addition
,the lack of scientific literacy will hurt in
speed
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 of progress and limit the civilization,
however
,government and families must correct response to needs of children that gaining
a knowledge
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 is the primary right .
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