In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidences.

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Earlier, students were studying in their own country but nowadays it becomes
trend
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to
study
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abroad. I think it has more benefits to
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overseas.
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development in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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number
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of advantages to
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study
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abroad. Mostly, developing
country's
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students are moving to
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developed countries because
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Foreign countries provide numerous courses in different fields and they
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use
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technology to teach students.
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, one of my friends
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to do a course in
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artificial intelligence.
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course was not available in our country so she move to Canada to continue her studies.
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study
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, there are lots of opportunities for jobs. They hardly sit idle after completing their course and companies hired them in
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the final
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semester and
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continue their work in that company.
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, there are some drawbacks
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global Exposure
  • Diverse Cultures
  • Language Proficiency
  • Networking Opportunities
  • International Network
  • Enhanced CV
  • Personal Growth
  • Independence
  • Adaptability
  • Resilience
  • High Costs
  • Tuition Fees
  • Living Expenses
  • Homesickness
  • Cultural Barriers
  • Culture Shock
  • Recognition of Qualifications
  • Language Barriers
  • Social Settings
  • Academic Settings
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