You are working for a company and need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: -explain why you want to take time off -give details of the amount of time you need -suggest how your work be covered while you are away

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Dear

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Johnson, I am writing to request

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paternity leave of 10 days. My wife and I are expecting our

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baby, and her delivery was due

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month, but her gynaecologist warned us of some complications recently. Because of the emergency, we had to take a call for a C-section which is planned

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two days.

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the doctor said her full recovery would take a month, she will be able to walk by herself and do small chores around the house after a week. In order to take care of her and the baby, I would have to take a leave for 10 days. Post that, my sister-in-law will come and stay with us, so I will recommence my work immediately after that. Since I am not leaving the town, anyone from the office can reach me on my phone, in case of an emergency.

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that, Aron, my teammate, has detailed knowledge of my projects and has agreed to

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my work for the

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. I hope you would consider my situation favourably and would promptly approve my leave application. Yours sincerely, Tim Hortons

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