Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Recently,some
people
think
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the expense of
petrol
is the better method
solving
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of solving
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transport
and
pollution
problems
.
Other
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challenge
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this
opinoin
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opinion
said about that have some impacts but not enough
decreasing
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problems
.We
also
need to do many more measure ways. I fully agree with
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later
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latter
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,there are some reasons and examples.
First
of all,as we know,
people
more use their own cars, if the
government
can
increased
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the
petrol
price
,
people
will reduce using own private vehicles,
choicing
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choosing
to use other public
transport
,
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this
way, the means traffic jam,air
pollution
and noise
pollution
will reduce far more than before. In some manufacturers using
petrol
make production or industry,
this
industrial trends
also
will cut down by human action. Meanwhile,
petrol
price
will add taxation to
government
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the government
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. It is extra company and
individuals
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stress.
Petrol
is
precious
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a precious
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resource from nature,
this
way
help
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helps
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government
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the government
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better control
petrol
using
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.
On the other hand
, only increasing the
price
of
petrol
is not enough to cut down
transport
and
pollution
problems
. It should be adding more measures. Some
evdence
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evidence
reveal
transport
and
pollution
problems
are caused by a variety of reasons. Following
by
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apply
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technology
develop
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development
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and science process more and more economy
damand
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demand
for
petrol
to help
progressing
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to progress
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,
such
as trade, travel and other
economy
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activities.
Nevertheless
, extra
petrol
price
will
caused
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be caused
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by company taxation stress.
Transport
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system
also
important
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an important
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role in
transport
problem,science measure
transport
system, some road traffic light should not be waiting a long
timein
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time in
a junction.
This
way can reduce time
in
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rush hour,
at
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but at
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the same time ,
pollution
is caused by others reasons.
For instance
, industry production
economy
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activities and agriculture
pollution
. The environment
pollution
is a big field .not only reduce
petrol
price
can
resolved
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resolve
be resolved
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. In
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conclusion
conclution
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conclusion
, increasing
petrol
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the petrol
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price
from the
government
can reduce
soem
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some
transport
and
pollution
problems
, but not enough from
this
,
people
also
need to do other measures to protect our earth environment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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