Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.

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Globally more men and women are opting
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work from
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whilst
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while
many students going for distance learning due to technology
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become affordable and easily accessible.
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,
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will discuss
positive
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impact that many
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working from
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and
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secondly
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I will discuss the negative impacts of more
children
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studying from their houses. Work from
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are
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advantegeous
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advantageous
for
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as they have time for their family and
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can enjoy homely food. As people stay
home
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, they will be less stressed and worried about their parents.
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adults
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can take care of their
family
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families
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and spend quality time.
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Furthermore
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people can
also
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save more money by staying at
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. As it limits the expenditure on households, where they save a lot on unnecessary spending.
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,
instead
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of having two
household
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spending, it will reduce by living in 1
home
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. Technological developments have
ruiend
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ruined
the childhood of a boy or girl as more
children
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are opting for
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home schooling
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homeschooling
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.
This
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affects
children
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's social and
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physical
phycial
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physical
growth in future.
For example
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,
children
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become more homesick and weak.
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,
children
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face a lot of
conceqences
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consequences
interacting in large
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crowded
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crowed
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places.
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, if
child
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a child
the child
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wants to pursue
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a masters
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masters
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degree which
the
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course
emphasis
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on social bonding
its
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difficult for
children
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to cope
up
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apply
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with
studies
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their studies
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. To conclude, vast advancement in
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technology
techonolgy
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technology
has led to serious problems in
children
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, whereas
adults
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find it positive.
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developments are disadvantageous for
children
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which affects
childhood
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the childhood
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of
children
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.
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