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Change request action is something that we need to do. do you agree or disagree

#change #request #action
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Dear Mohamed/Shamik, Hope you are both doing well. Just had a quick call with Dinesh & Pranav regarding the ACTID-092330 on
Change
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 Request
Action
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 that they are proposing to close with details below. Allow me to share my views on
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. I understand that there is an ongoing discussion about whether there will be a need for a
change
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 request
tool
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 or if you will have a new
tool
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 in place since SharePoint is moving into power apps. I highly recommend that we don’t close
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action
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 since the way forward is not yet finalized.
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, one of the requirements in our Effective Closure
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 is not to have a reference to any future actions. Closing
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action
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, for now, will lead to a potential finding in
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future
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 Closure Reviews/Audits.
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, there is a risk wherein you may decide of using a new
change
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 request
tool
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 as part of your way forward. Since
this
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 option will require an approval process, we will lose the learnings from the previous
tool
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 because we did not do the necessary deep dive on
this
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 as part of the
action
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. At the same time, if you opt for
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 option, training will
also
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 be required. I
also
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 understand that if you end up deciding
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, the intent of the
action
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 is no longer required.
However
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, we cannot say that for now since you have not yet finalized the decision on how you want to proceed.
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, let’s keep the
action
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 open or extend the due dates as needed until the decision on how you are going to manage the
change
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 is concluded. Glad to discuss
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 as required.
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