It is often said that “when in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they are visiting? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?
There are people who believe that we need to accept and adapt
with
the Change preposition
to
culture
of a nation when we visit there.In my point of view its
not mandatory to adapt to any Replace the word
it's
it is
culture
as part of our travelling,however
, it is good to to
have an appreciation Remove the redundancy
apply
about
every Change preposition
of
culture
. Culture
and language
are inexintically
linked Correct your spelling
intrinsically
each
other, understand a Change preposition
to each
culture
without knowing its language
may remain incomplete
Adaptation
to culture
whenever we visit is impossible and not mandatary
as well even though tasting every bit of its uniqueness Correct your spelling
mandatory
for
example, food, art, and Add the comma(s)
,for
language
provide us an
overall idea of how it is. Eating traditional food and wearing Add the preposition
with an
traditional
dress cannot be considered Add an article
a traditional
as
cultural Correct your spelling
a
adaptation
. Subsequently
partaking a
particular locality's entertainment may Change preposition
in a
made
us feel the vibe of cultural uniqueness but Change the verb form
be made
make
adaptation
is something more than that. Adaptation
is something we carry ahead as part of us in Correct your spelling
contrast
contrst
to sharing and partaking.
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contrast
Language
is the womb and backbone of culture
and vice versa. Eventhogh
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Even though
language
is learned from culture
, culture
is defined by language
. Learning a culture
without it's
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its
language
is possible, however
it will be partial. Add a comma
,however
For instance
, best
source to learn about a Add an article
the best
culture
is to know more about its literature. Normally, core
theme of every Add an article
the core
a core
writings
like novels, Change to a singular noun
writing
drama
and poems are might be the values, Fix the agreement mistake
dramas
conflicts
along with other styles of living. Correct word choice
and conflicts
In addition
, usages of language
communicates
cultural orientations of each Change the verb form
communicate
places
, in some Change to a singular noun
place
languages
there Add a comma
,languages
is
different phrases to address people in different age groups while others keep only gender difference.
In conclusion, while we travel across different countries we may make use of the Change the verb form
are
opertunities
to experience its uniqueness rather Correct your spelling
opportunities
Correct word choice
than to
to
adapt with it. Mastering Remove the marker
apply
language
makes perfection in knowledge about culture
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite