It is often said that “when in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they are visiting? Do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?

There are people who believe that we need to accept and adapt
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the
culture
of a nation when we visit there.In my point of view
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not mandatory to adapt to any
culture
as part of our travelling,
however
, it is good to
to
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have an appreciation
about
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every
culture
.
Culture
and
language
are
inexintically
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intrinsically
linked
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other, understand a
culture
without knowing its
language
may remain incomplete
Adaptation
to
culture
whenever we visit is impossible and not
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as well even though tasting every bit of its uniqueness
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example, food, art, and
language
provide us
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overall idea of how it is. Eating traditional food and wearing
traditional
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dress cannot be considered
as
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cultural
adaptation
.
Subsequently
partaking
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particular locality's entertainment may
made
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make
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us feel the vibe of cultural uniqueness but
adaptation
is something more than that.
Adaptation
is something we carry ahead as part of us in
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contrast
contrst
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contrast
to sharing and partaking.
Language
is the womb and backbone of
culture
and vice versa.
Eventhogh
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Even though
language
is learned from
culture
,
culture
is defined by
language
. Learning a
culture
without
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language
is possible,
however
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it will be partial.
For instance
,
best
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source to learn about a
culture
is to know more about its literature. Normally,
core
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theme of every
writings
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like novels,
drama
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and poems are might be the values,
conflicts
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along with other styles of living.
In addition
, usages of
language
communicates
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cultural orientations of each
places
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, in some
languages
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there
is
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different phrases to address people in different age groups while others keep only gender difference. In conclusion, while we travel across different countries we may make use of the
opertunities
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opportunities
to experience its uniqueness rather
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to
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adapt with it. Mastering
language
makes perfection in knowledge about
culture
as well.
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