children are generally more successful in foreign language than adults. Thus, it is better to learn in childhood. Do you agree or disagree?

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children
have more ability to learn
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than adults. So it is more
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to learn these skills in childhood period . I agree with
this
notion due to their learning age and less stress regarding
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the future
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. To commence with
view
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of agreement that
children
can learn international
language
because their brain is still in the growth phase. To elaborate it, kinder have the ability to learn quickly and they can create new skills in less time including
a
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speaking
language
. They
also
have more motivation and confidence to
study
new
valueable
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valuable
new things.
For instance
, "World Health Organisation "
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during
durinf
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during
their research found
about
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the
mind
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capability that
children
's
mind
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can grasp more knowledge conveniently as
compare
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compared
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to adults .
Thus
,
a
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learning a foreign
language
easier
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is easier
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for
children
because they are in their learning process.
Further
strengthening the views that
children
do not have
much burden
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on their
mind
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due to which they are flexible to
study
novel
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the novel
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language
. To explicate it, in schools teachers do not pressurise students for their
study
that is
why
children
are free from stress and much quality of time to learn something new as like
language
which
also
provide
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them career option.
For example
, "A survey
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conducted by INCD A ( The National career development Association) found that
children
who learnt
new
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language
in their primary school got more work opportunities.
Therefore
, by studying foreign
language
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children
can brighten their future. In conclusion , It is clear that pupils are better to learn new skills
such
as learning
language
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the language
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because of the capability of their
mind
and enough free time to
study
.
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